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The Werewolf and the Halfling Ch. 09

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by Anonymous04/25/10

Still as muddled as ever!

This is a tough one for the reader. Sentences starting without giving a clue who is meant, some of them are a bit better but still this author needs to give a structure to the story so we can follow it.

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