I thought the worst for a minute or two, but the ending was cute and unexpected- nice story!
... you're sure of a big surprise! This one caught me by surprise and I loved it. Nice build of suspense to a classic TE climax. Great story!
"Northern Short-Tailed Shrew" he he he... perhaps it was attracted by 'toe-jam' ... cute, erotic and filled with chucklebones (grin) (~_~) good luck and happy earth day!!!
I was a little worried. I didn't look at the category and had no idea what a Blahblahrina was. Cute story!
The way you built up the fear of this little creature was amazing. I kep thinking 'What the hell is the damn thing' and how it wasn't going to be very romantic for the two lovers to get torn to shreds by some terrible beast. Really fantastic idea. Awesome.
I thought (without looking) I was reading one of your Erotic Horror's and the ending completely threw me! Very funny! Well done and good luck :)
I kept glancing at the category thinking there'd been some mistake. Nicely done!
for the nice words, compliments are always welcome. Speaking of compliments, I still love this story, the ending is unexpected. Gr8 job darlin.
Good luck in the contest.
Too funny. Interesting visual images, and loved the twist ending.
This is what satire is about *laugh* Well done, and good luck in the contest!
I know I'm gullible, but you TOTALLY got me!!! :PPP That's what I get for not looking at the category! ROFL
GREAT ending! :))
That must've hurt! But I'm chuckling... so it's all good. Very clever story, TE.
Lmao, I totally didn't expect that! xD niceee
I just couldn't help but giggle.
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