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Memories
That was so hot. I hope you continue with your stories. I really enjoyed it. Thanks for letting memories come back.
Nice beginning...
That's a pretty good start. Can't wait for the next chapter
Nice.
I still shower with my sis when I visit her. Our initial consummation wasn't quite this straightforward but still a hot story!
nice start
A hot story, but you could use some editorial assistance for spelling errors. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Looking forward to more
looking forward to future chapters.
Not So Little Brother Ch.01
Please bring us Ch.02 as soon as possible. WOW
Not So Little Brother Ch.01
Please bring us Ch.02 as soon as possible. WOW
Why bother?
It's a great story but, in May 2005, you posted Ch. 1 of something else and *never followed up.* I feel we'll be left "hanging" once again.
Good Story!
I wish you would write the next chapter of this fine story. I can't wait to read the ending of this.
Next Please
I hope you finish this because I'm really enjoying this story.
It's coming...
Thanks for the kind words. I'm currently in the middle of a thousand different things, but I do get to piece the second chapter together bit by bit. It should be ready soon.
yadda yadda
yadda yadda yadda... Like we believe you. Your last story was from -05 and now this and it is already -08. Story was great, it was really good, hot and nice and all. But just admit it, you wont write a part 2.
The story was very well written, but if you spend few years to write just a novell, well, there are plenty of other good authors who have love for writing. Geezz, three years and just two intros, I wont bother looking for chapter 2 after this. So even if you write it and upload it, you wont get any readers anymore.
waste
never finished,over sized dicks,over sized tits we are lucky he didn't finish it was a waste of time just like the rest of his stories
Poorly written
This is very poorly written. Is English your first language?
Any more?
Any chance there will be a chapter 2, lo these many years later?
One of the poorest written stories on the site
The lack of spell check and many misplaced and duplicated words make this story almost unreadable. The work appears to be written by a 14 year old who got poor grades in English. A common word processor would identify most of the errors.
good
Please rite a sequel it has damn good potential also i like the way you didnt hop rite into sex it keeps the storie flowing so to speak id honestly pay for this kinda slow moving storie it keep the brain workin keep up the good work
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