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Moons of Eve

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by darkerdreamer03/24/07

The numerous

metaphores comparing Eve to the moon were creative, I would have struggled to find so many comparisons in the human anatomy but you truly showed me up. ;) My only criticisms would be minor rhyme and punctuation questions; I'll leave it up to you if you want them.

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by My Erotic Trail03/24/07

moons of Eve

I enjoyed your poem as well as its perspective (~_~)

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