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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/31/07

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I didn't get all the way through this.

Please learn the difference between 'loose' and 'lose'.

Also 'peak' and 'peek'

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by Anonymous04/01/07

Good but long

Damn this was long...would've been nicer broken up into "chapters"

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by Anonymous04/01/07

WOW

A great story. I seems you put a lot of effort into it. You did not limit yourself to describing the sex scenes.
No, you described the setting and the people involved in a way that makes it easy to imagine them.
Thanks!

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