All Comments on '..But You're Borryable...'

"You’re the kite

I fly in blue bunting

And silver clouds." the use of bunting was great and unexpected. Two criticisms: you spell borryable several different ways in the poem, not sure if that was intentional. Also words like "Thee" seem a little out of place in this stream-of-thought poem. I can say I wish I knew what borryable means ;)

I enjoyed your right!!!! (~_~) I meant ...Write!! thanks for the read.

I can no longer see you. TK U MLJ LV NV