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An Unusual Twist of Fate

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by My Erotic Trail03/26/07

...twist of fate

informative, witty, erotically wonderful write. (~_~) a grand contribution to the Earth Day movement (grin) The jungle lure... Karen! so, when you see a naked lady 'one' should beware? (grinin) loved your tail... I meant tale! (~_*)

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Good story to make everyone think

You know, Karen was not totally fair to John. I mean, he did plant his tree in her a few times (lol).

This is what Earth Day is all about with a nice reversed surprise ending.

Cutting down the rain forest is tragic. We do not even know that is in there. God gave us everything we need and to make the rain forest extinct, well, we may never know until it is too late.

Good story to make everyone think.

Thanks

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by l8bloom03/26/07

3 cheers!!

Wonderfully sexy & fun, I loved it! Grin from ear to ear. Thanks for writing!

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by TE99903/26/07

Nicely done!

Clever premise and a nice twist at the end. The environment strikes back! Good luck in the contest.

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by WhiteWave4803/30/07

Trussed and facing the truth

What a neat story with such a clever twist at the end. She clearly knew how to use her charms to defend the environment, even if she could save only a small part of the forest.

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by Darkniciad04/15/07

Nice twist

I could sort of see it coming, but there were just enough surprises to do the trick. Well done, and good luck in the contest.

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by RogueLurker04/16/07

great story

a nice bit of humour with a definite bit of revenge. Well done.

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by damppanties04/17/07

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That was an entertaining story, though I hope Karen is planning to untie him after he has had enough time to think about his actions! Good luck in the contest.

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by Anonymous04/19/07

Wow.

That was truly wicked. And I loved it!

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by lorencino11/20/07

Sex that is beautifully sufficient unto the day, the destructive role of world capitalism's unsustainable consumption of natural resources, and how a quick and easy possibility of fertilizing an ovum in a woman results in the honour of providing fertilizer for all of those important early years in the life of the newly planted saplings are the ingredients of a perfectly cheeky little story. And to think that he even provided the clearing so that the sun could energize the new growth—brilliant touch.

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