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Hot!!!
Great first story, please continue writing. I'd love to see more. Kisses, Bella
Great Job! Extremly erotic, very sexy!
I really enjoyed this! Excellent job!
Wow!
Great writing. Please continue with another chapter!
I'm always amazed at how the female character-----
instantly knows knows to the 1/4 inch the size of a guys cock.
I;m equally amazed at the guys who feel that they must give their character an over sized cock in order to get a high rating from the children who need that picture to rate the story high.
Me? I stop reading and give it a low score.
Nice effort...
But you really need an editor. Poor punctuation and paragraph structure.
Loved the story and the idea.
The story just needed to be a bit longer! Otherwise, it was great. I liked the way she went after him. But you needed a leand in to that scene. Tell us why she wanted him so much.
awesome
Great job hope to read more soon
way cool
man that was a hot story
rape
nothing but rape you need some jail time to see what its like to be raped
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