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Adventures of Sarah Ch. 03

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by Anonymous04/02/07

Falling asleep

are you ever going to get to the meat of the matter or just drag this out until christmas.

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by Anonymous04/09/07

boring, kick it up a notch

Less haiku- more Mailer.

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by Anonymous05/10/07

Excellent buildup

The ebb and flow of your stories, the development of the characters, the details....you're good

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