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I'll be laughing for a while yet
about this one...
Very Onion-esque
Well done...
HAHAHA
Waxing his carrot!!!! Thats awesome!
Good on you mate!
About time someone took this site seriously. A long overdue critique on the wankers who insist on contributing nothing but criticism and derogation.
Cheers!
Loved It
This is great. It reads like something that could be posted on the Onion.
Awesome!
Now that's just funny; I don't care who you are.
Nice
Well written! Now I just *have* to go back and read your other stuff. :)
Ironic or Meta?
So is it ironic or meta that this story which mocks bad stories is actually pretty bad in and of itself? (Ok, so it's actually mediocre)
Hmmm...
You think he'd be mad if I go ahead and steal that brilliant line...how did it go..oh yeah "a pair of rockin' tits." Pure Genius.
Hehehe, thanks. Very cute.
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