Your descriptive narration is beautifully done. Toying verbal exchanges leave the reader smiling while the groin becomes involved.
Erotic flirtation. Enjoyed the dialogue between the two, the inuendos and actions. could picture this happening in "the real world". Hank
Nice start but it's half of a story... finish it and it might be worth reading.
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Tastefull introduction ...
Your descriptive narration is beautifully done. Toying verbal exchanges leave the reader smiling while the groin becomes involved.
Excellent Story
Erotic flirtation. Enjoyed the dialogue between the two, the inuendos and actions. could picture this happening in "the real world".
Hank
FInish it
Nice start but it's half of a story... finish it and it might be worth reading.
real estate Sunshine Coast
nice wonderful website
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real estate sunshine coast
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