I have enjoyed these past few mornings reading this story. You did a great job! Thanks !
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Anonymous04/05/07
Great Job
Well written, fun story. the characters and scenes came alive. Also, thank you for writing the whole thing and posting it as a completed piece.
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Anonymous04/06/07
This Is What You Can Do Story Teller
The Appropriate Score would be much higher but for the 100 limit.
You and but a few others are the reason this site is head and shoulders above any other.
There can be a place for all or most of the others but you bring much to the table that they haven't even sampled - yet. You don't need mirrors or absurdities, just hard work, talent and respect for your characters and audience
So please continue to be what you can be to entertain and arouse us within the human realities you express so well.
English
Great
Your last sentence summed up everything very well.
Boyd
Very, very nicely done !
I have enjoyed these past few mornings reading this story. You did a great job! Thanks !
Great Job
Well written, fun story. the characters and scenes came alive. Also, thank you for writing the whole thing and posting it as a completed piece.
This Is What You Can Do Story Teller
The Appropriate Score would be much higher but for the 100 limit.
You and but a few others are the reason this site is head and shoulders above any other.
There can be a place for all or most of the others but you bring much to the table that they haven't even sampled - yet. You don't need mirrors or absurdities, just hard work, talent and respect for your characters and audience
So please continue to be what you can be to entertain and arouse us within the human realities you express so well.
With Respect & Very High Regard
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WOW
Great story I loved it.
Really Nice
Yep, if they get to the grandchildren then the glory days
will be there...
Thank you
A great story. Thank you.
Smooth slow and easy
Kind of like a small postcard town.
Thx
njce
good read nice build up to a beautiful end
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