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by unapologetic03/29/07

Interesting

I've never quite liked this kind of poetry, but your piece has made me think that it is definitely worth a second look.

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by LeBroz04/03/07

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A rather jarring prose piece — if only because one expects the thoughts to have been smoothed out. An interesting different perspective.

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