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by Anonymous

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by The Navigator06/04/07

Wrong number

You lost me when you said your dick was 3" around. If its circumference is 3", its diameter is about 0.95". A little bit larger than a felt tipped marker, or a good cigar. If, on the other hand, you meant it was 3" in diameter (very unlikely), it would be about 9.3" "around". The remainer of your story suffered similarly.

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by Anonymous06/04/07

Semi-literate Drivel.

Learn English.

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by Anonymous06/04/07

Eww! Organisms?!

I try to avoid experiencing any "organisms" if possible during sex. However, I'm all about orgasms :)

Please ask someone to proof your work before you submit it in the future. Despite all of your hot action, all of these "little" issues really take a reader out of your story (which is probably not your goal; at least it's not for most writers I know).

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