All Comments on 'B's First Time With A Woman'

You lost me when you said your dick was 3" around. If its circumference is 3", its diameter is about 0.95". A little bit larger than a felt tipped marker, or a good cigar. If, on the other hand, you meant it was 3" in diameter (very unlikely), it would be about 9.3" "around". The remainer of your story suffered similarly.

Learn English.

I try to avoid experiencing any "organisms" if possible during sex. However, I'm all about orgasms :)

Please ask someone to proof your work before you submit it in the future. Despite all of your hot action, all of these "little" issues really take a reader out of your story (which is probably not your goal; at least it's not for most writers I know).