Best story I have read on here in a very long time. Look forward to part 2 sometime soon I hope...
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Anonymous04/04/07
Hot does not begin to describe story
Best story of the year, maybe several years.
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Anonymous04/04/07
Hot Momma
great story - it kept me hard as a rock tell us more
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Anonymous04/04/07
yeah baby!
fuck me running...i loved this story!...kinda reminded me of my life in the beginning...although incest is not my thing, i found myself getting soaking wet...i'm a vouyer at heart and if i had a young stud by my side i would have rode him till he begged me to stop!
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Anonymous04/04/07
LOVED IT
Had to read it twice. It was that good, Kept me hard for hours just picturing the whole show.
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Anonymous04/04/07
FIRE
One of the best I've ever read, and I've read plenty. What a sexy, warm-hearted story. Simply magnificent, I'm soaking now!
- Hazel
Now THAT was wild! Hell of a ride, and hotter than hell. Smack down fantasy at it's very nastiest.
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Anonymous12/28/07
Brilliant Again !
Absolutely brilliant piece of writing. I am working my way through all your stories as they are so good. More power to your pen. Tear all the hypocrisy down, I think most men would admit to having a thing for their mothers - it aint sick, it's human nature.
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Anonymous05/02/08
Very good
Well written stuff but this is one in a huge line of stories where the author doesn't understand bra sizes. 48EE means the mother has big tits but is also grossly overweight. It makes the reader stop and lose the flow in the same way that a grammatical error does.
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Anonymous01/31/10
...XXX..VANNA WHITE all over again..with Laura San Giacomo..XXX!!!
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Anonymous03/28/10
Great story.
I used to ride myself before eye problems forced me to stop and I have been to a few rallies that were so close to what you described it vould have been any one of them....
I loved this one. Got me very wet and very naked. Earl Browder has a biker story as well, with his grandmom. Its a very good one too. If you haven't read it too i recommend it. Anyway, I really liked this one and will continue working my way through your list.
Loved it!! My Mom was a red head, stacked, & Very HOT!
As I read this I couldn't help thinking of what a wonderful Mother I had!
I really like your work. Thank You for sharing your storys with us.
Will there be a #2 too this one?? Please.
Hello there, A great story for sure.
One hot looking lady+a guy+ a bike
= a great time.
Yeah the old man was a real dick,
glad you gave his grave the respect he
so well deserved.
Yup Mom was a sweetie, glad you made
her so happy!
You did a great job of combining a mom/son and father/ daughter story and actually making it hot and worth reading again
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Anonymous01/06/16
Hot!
One of the best I've read recently! Not only mother-son but a worked in a hot father-daughter story and great woman on woman action....all three scenarios my favorites!!! About the only thing that would have made the ending better? Having both women pregnant in the December pinup by their respective "husbands"...that way mommy would have gotten her wish of having a grand baby!
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Anonymous03/24/16
supercaliflagilisticexpialidocious
I love your stuff! Always wanted to take my Momma to a rally with me, but she never would go. She was hot! Short with brown hair and muscular legs. She grew up on a farm and had always known hard work, so her muscles were well-defined. B-cup breasts that remained perky until her death. Just a little extra weight. Enough to give her the curves she knew I loved so well. Love this story. Unlike others I am not necessarily a fan of obligatory pregnancy in an incest story, so this is fine. Think about it. If Momma here is over forty when they first attend the biker rally and she got pregnant that very night, she would be probably over 60 when the fruit of her loins graduated high school. So I think skipping procreation is ok here. Maybe if she were younger. Write more like this.
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Anonymous04/17/16
ONE OF MY FAVORITE STORIES, BUT FAR TOO SHORT!!!!
I reread this story to refresh my memory about why I had it on my favorite list, The second time through it was obvious. I regret that it had enough errors that I would have to rate it as a 'second draft' and not a finished story:
Mom (mom) (87)
Mom’s (mom’s) (20)
Old Man (old man) (6)
Old Man’s (old man’s)
Motorcycle (motorcycle)
(-morning) at 8:00 A.M. (AS OPPOSED TO WHAT 8:00 AM IN THE EVENING????)
less clothes (fewer)
world class (world-class)
road side (roadside)
Mid afternoon (midafternoon)
biker's rally (bikers’)
bi-sexual (bisexual)
tube tope (top)
sale-persons (salespersons)
Pin-up (pin-up)
Santa Clause (Claus)
Wowzers....
Best story I have read on here in a very long time. Look forward to part 2 sometime soon I hope...
Hot does not begin to describe story
Best story of the year, maybe several years.
Hot Momma
great story - it kept me hard as a rock tell us more
yeah baby!
fuck me running...i loved this story!...kinda reminded me of my life in the beginning...although incest is not my thing, i found myself getting soaking wet...i'm a vouyer at heart and if i had a young stud by my side i would have rode him till he begged me to stop!
LOVED IT
Had to read it twice. It was that good, Kept me hard for hours just picturing the whole show.
FIRE
One of the best I've ever read, and I've read plenty. What a sexy, warm-hearted story. Simply magnificent, I'm soaking now!
- Hazel
Oh Yeah!
very hot stuff, exciting and stimulating. Keep up the great work :)
WOW, Smokin!!!
I love this story. Any chance of it being continued? It made me want to climb on my bike and find a rally right now.
Great Story
A different take on this subject and a good one. Please write a part #2.
alternate insanity
Now THAT was wild! Hell of a ride, and hotter than hell. Smack down fantasy at it's very nastiest.
Brilliant Again !
Absolutely brilliant piece of writing. I am working my way through all your stories as they are so good. More power to your pen. Tear all the hypocrisy down, I think most men would admit to having a thing for their mothers - it aint sick, it's human nature.
Very good
Well written stuff but this is one in a huge line of stories where the author doesn't understand bra sizes. 48EE means the mother has big tits but is also grossly overweight. It makes the reader stop and lose the flow in the same way that a grammatical error does.
...XXX..VANNA WHITE all over again..with Laura San Giacomo..XXX!!!
Great story.
I used to ride myself before eye problems forced me to stop and I have been to a few rallies that were so close to what you described it vould have been any one of them....
Nice
I took this story for a spin and found it to be a VERY NICE RIDE!!
Bad
It lack everything that makes a history what it is.
It was a Awsome story I loved every word of it hot as hell
Great story
This is your best work. I would like a part 2.
A fine tale
You oughta consider writing for a living... pretty accurate depiction of a rally, too.
very exciting
loved it was great story
It to short
I loved it but it was to short.
I like nearly all of your work, Ahab.
Yes, it could have been longer but I liked it very much. Thank you for writing.
hot hot hot
I loved this one. Got me very wet and very naked. Earl Browder has a biker story as well, with his grandmom. Its a very good one too. If you haven't read it too i recommend it. Anyway, I really liked this one and will continue working my way through your list.
Whooooyaaah!!!
Loved it!! My Mom was a red head, stacked, & Very HOT!
As I read this I couldn't help thinking of what a wonderful Mother I had!
I really like your work. Thank You for sharing your storys with us.
Will there be a #2 too this one?? Please.
HOT!
Very hot story! I have a thing for biker chicks! Include boots next time! lol
Damn, that was good
Hello there, A great story for sure.
One hot looking lady+a guy+ a bike
= a great time.
Yeah the old man was a real dick,
glad you gave his grave the respect he
so well deserved.
Yup Mom was a sweetie, glad you made
her so happy!
that was awesome
You did a great job of combining a mom/son and father/ daughter story and actually making it hot and worth reading again
Hot!
One of the best I've read recently! Not only mother-son but a worked in a hot father-daughter story and great woman on woman action....all three scenarios my favorites!!! About the only thing that would have made the ending better? Having both women pregnant in the December pinup by their respective "husbands"...that way mommy would have gotten her wish of having a grand baby!
supercaliflagilisticexpialidocious
I love your stuff! Always wanted to take my Momma to a rally with me, but she never would go. She was hot! Short with brown hair and muscular legs. She grew up on a farm and had always known hard work, so her muscles were well-defined. B-cup breasts that remained perky until her death. Just a little extra weight. Enough to give her the curves she knew I loved so well. Love this story. Unlike others I am not necessarily a fan of obligatory pregnancy in an incest story, so this is fine. Think about it. If Momma here is over forty when they first attend the biker rally and she got pregnant that very night, she would be probably over 60 when the fruit of her loins graduated high school. So I think skipping procreation is ok here. Maybe if she were younger. Write more like this.
ONE OF MY FAVORITE STORIES, BUT FAR TOO SHORT!!!!
I reread this story to refresh my memory about why I had it on my favorite list, The second time through it was obvious. I regret that it had enough errors that I would have to rate it as a 'second draft' and not a finished story:
Mom (mom) (87)
Mom’s (mom’s) (20)
Old Man (old man) (6)
Old Man’s (old man’s)
Motorcycle (motorcycle)
(-morning) at 8:00 A.M. (AS OPPOSED TO WHAT 8:00 AM IN THE EVENING????)
less clothes (fewer)
world class (world-class)
road side (roadside)
Mid afternoon (midafternoon)
biker's rally (bikers’)
bi-sexual (bisexual)
tube tope (top)
sale-persons (salespersons)
Pin-up (pin-up)
Santa Clause (Claus)
Yummy!
Definitely a fun story worth every star! Thank you!
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