NOW THAT is quite a story...so hot we all may be dripping?
I just wonder what might happen the next time it rains???
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Anonymous04/22/07
Awesome Story
Awesome story with a lot of mystery and drama. Well, she certainly got her wish! It appears she even enjoyed delivering the revenge. Great ending. Only wish a woman like that would approach me someday with a similar offer.
English
I liked it.
It was different. It was creative. The writing was professional. What was there not to like.
Thanks
one of your best
I really love your writing. This is one of your best. Short but to the point and well written. Loved the humour as well.
A hot tale!!!
Wow, what a hot, hot tale! There is so much that could be said about this clever, humorous story but any further comments would be superfluous. Pete.
A SPECIAL time for both of them!
NOW THAT is quite a story...so hot we all may be dripping?
I just wonder what might happen the next time it rains???
Awesome Story
Awesome story with a lot of mystery and drama. Well, she certainly got her wish! It appears she even enjoyed delivering the revenge. Great ending. Only wish a woman like that would approach me someday with a similar offer.
Hmm?
Well written, as usual. But left me with so many questions. May 2nd? What's going on, why, etc?
too much fun -
Nice - quick - fun - well done -
So why?
Short, sharp, but what's the point?
Why in the church?
Erica Jong?
The "Zipless Fuck" comes to mind.
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