Accident, But Sister Knew?

Ok

I did enjoy the story but I'm a little confused as to how you were able to suck your sister's nipples while you were fucking her from behind ? You also have to loosen up a little while writing , otherwise ...quite good .

Not too bad

for a first effort. Quite a few gaffes in grammar but still fairly readable. The follow-up should be interesting as the brother and sister confront the sexual reality they created.

Hell Yeah!

So hot! Can't wait for the aftermath... Too hot.

loved it!

That was so hot, you have to write another. Maybe a preg sis? mmmmmm. I could imagine it was me and my sis. Great job.

Accidents are the best

I love the "accident" scenario the best of any I think. Nicely done. You do need a little more proof-reading on your submissions as there were some minor word-usage glitches. Still, it was pretty darn hot.

funtastic

can't wait for part 2, good first showing kewlcop

sweet

sweet story i hope you finish it soon and don't leave us hanging like so many of the asshole writers on this site

editor please

get an editor and never post a story with out going through the editor way to many wrong words,missing words and miss spelled words it really ruins the flow of the story when the reader has to stop and figure out what the writer is trying to say

is there a part 2 to this story? it was good

pregnant

Outcome...pregnant!

wow love it

that was a great story, hope there is a part two

It was fake

of course its fake!

Its a made up story you moron!

kool

Hey man don't worrie about it ... she knew it was u ...u were the only guy in the house how could she not know it was u .... shee wanted it. And let it happen not once but twice ....hell I would have went back in and did it with her a few more times and then kept f**king her all the time like that ...I don't care she is my sister she wanted it and got it and would get it somemore

Moooore!!!!!!!!!!!

You sad there whood be a nother story. That was in 07 & it's 12 now!!!!!!!!!!! Where is the next story?I hate it whin thay don't followe up!!!!!!!!!!!!

Very exciting story when we know that the sister was fully aware that it was her brother who had sucked her pussy and fucked her and receive her full load of her brother's cum!!I can't wait for a second chapter!10 on 10!

Is that all?

Very arousing story - didn't expect the denouement. We're waiting for the the next one - does he fuck his sister again, does she tell him Becky was pissed off and wants what her mate had?

yeah great story..please send him back in there to fuck her hard..

bad

This by far the worse story I have ever read. You need help

This is a great story. Anyone who says differently is wrong.

When next chapter?

This was hot !When next chapter?

Nice....

I wonder?

You wote this 9 years ago, so......

....... I guess we aren't ever going to ever get the rest of the story as you promised to know the outcome after all - are we?