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Beneath the Surface

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by Anonymous

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by subriver04/14/07

Leaving me curious

Interesting how we are allowed to gaze in all their little fantasies and daily stories. Very well written.

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by Anonymous07/02/07

Loved the subtlety

how scratching beneath the surface of prim, proper, everyday veneer of life can reveal such tight hot vignettes. I have now taken to people watching with a keen interest, and I often get quite wet when thinking of what could really be happening.............

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