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great, dark, twisted start.
Well this certainly whetted my appetite for the forthcoming chapters. The mixture of savage and tender eroticism was, I felt, nicely played and well written. Am very interested in where you go from here. I would have liked it to have been longer but it is always best to be left wanting more.
Delightful.
Dark, beautiful story, please keep writing.
You know I love this.
I absolutely love your work. You are awesome!
Excellent start!
Riviting! I need more, much more! This first chapter sets a grim mood and yet teases nicely with erotica.
Scary and creepy
but not very erotic, at least not yet.
Wonderful
It was all there, the terror, the creep factor, the chill. Fantastic start.
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