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by BOSTONFICTIONWRITER04/05/07

Interesting

Hmm, methinks you had better marry Holly before you lose her to the blonde woman.

It sounds like you need to leave a camera by your bed, bigman(lol).

Interesting story but missing some basic things, such as a plot, a beginning, dialogue, and character development.

I'm a sucker for dialogue and character development.

Still, the sex scene got kept me interested enough to finish reading your story.

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