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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/14/07

Great Images

I liked it all, but especially Summer.

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by WhiteWave4804/18/07

Delicate richness

There's a delicate richness in the way you've used language in this beautiful series of images representing a sexual relationship. Constructed around the cycle of blossom and bloom, the progression of thought lingers briefly in the earthy reality of summer, such a contrast to the lightness of spring. Beautiful.

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by Anonymous06/03/07

Sweet little poem...

I'm not too much in the comment mood, so I'll ditch the flowery stuff and just say it like it is: I thought it was a sweet little poem which recognized that renewed zest for life one experiences at the beginning of a new season; especially when sharing the changes with a loved one. That was one hell of a terrible sentence, but...there you go...

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