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by Anonymous

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by WickedEve04/02/07

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What? Your poem is skimming over the top of my brain and not really sinking in. I pretty much get it, but it's not one of those sink-in-and-stay-with-you kind of poems. Maybe it's just me being a lame reader. ;) Anyway... it sounds pretty.

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by wildsweetone04/02/07

Poetry Forum

i mentioned this poem in the New Poem Review thread in the Poetry Forum - wildsweetone

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by My Erotic Trail04/04/07

bright

witty word wizard (~_~) reminds me of... the sound of sunshine... nice write blue.

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by LeBroz01/12/08

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That exhultant moment captured so well — at least till he rolls over and falls asleep...

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by Bill Dada02/08/08

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Describing the action is easy, describing the feeling next to impossible. You make it look easy.

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