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by Anonymous04/09/07

Really enjoyed the story.....

please tell me that there will be a chapter 2?

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by Anonymous04/10/07

What a Gentleman!

Things were pretty good if somewhat predictable. You lost me when he groaned his own name as he shot off inside what is described as a "beautiful woman" Main suggestion is a little more proof reading prior to posting. Keep it up, it gets easier as you go

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by Anonymous04/10/07

Enjoyable

i really enjoyed this, and especially as your firt submission, you should maybe read over it and change some few errors. But all in all, an enjoyable read. This would be a nice start to a very interesting story. Continuing this would be very worth while. Well done so far.

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by hathorbr107/02/11

Beautiful!

I loved this story! It was beautifully written and I want to see more! Great Job!!!

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