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WickedEveWickedEveabout 17 years ago
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I'm glad you titled this daydream. It does have a surreal quality. At first, I was trying to understand the poem, but the title is telling me to just enjoy the words, which are placed quite nicely together.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
There's heat here

Are you sure this is non-erotic. It feels hot to me. ;) I like this and the title complements this poem. Thank you.

LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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A surrealist painting put to words that let the reader create his own painting.

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