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by WickedEve04/02/07

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I'm glad you titled this daydream. It does have a surreal quality. At first, I was trying to understand the poem, but the title is telling me to just enjoy the words, which are placed quite nicely together.

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by 04/03/07

There's heat here

Are you sure this is non-erotic. It feels hot to me. ;) I like this and the title complements this poem. Thank you.

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by LeBroz01/12/08

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A surrealist painting put to words that let the reader create his own painting.

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