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Loved this story so much, even with the translation mistakes. Wish there could've been more to the story with Taylor and Caleb starting a new relationship.

I hope you truly are not bringing this story to an end. There is so much you can do with it. But you really need to run your work past a native English speaker to get it right before you publish it. Primarily you have to start getting she-he-it right and you haven't.