All Comments on 'You Want Me to What?? Ch. 02'

keep writing and I will keep reading.

Thanks

sweet really sweet as well as sexy the very best combination

What a lovely story! In with all the stories of random sex, here's a young couple in love. Wonderful!

Very sexy and sweet. I'm glad Dan didn't let her remove her bikini bottom just to beat Kathy.

Well written and very erotic.

When are you making the next chPters... Cuz I want to keep reading seriously

One of the best stories I've ever read.

A lot - well paced - all the required bullshit getting them both to the right pace at the right time - the right distractions to keep you wondering who would dop the stupid thing first - he stopped her so no one did nice ending -

Gotta love Moms

Chapters 1 and 2 combine into a fun, light story. Thanks for writing.

loved the way it bowled along...the wet shirt contest is typical of students having a laugh and fun...I was glad he got up and stopped her showing her pussy off....then the scene back in the room was just loving....they certainly were meant for each other...a great read...enjoyed it....

I enjoy this type of story about love far more than the bitches who want to flash their cunts all the time then end up fucking other guys and the wife swapping stories are just shite with all the fuck slut skank whores ...I hate those stories as the are not worth reading and not even remotely sexy......some good stories but a load of shite too....

Yes. A great ending to a kids love story.

Great,including a surprise ending as well!

Great story! I found it fairly realistic. Interesting that the conclusion didn't include a full sexual scene.

That added to the real feel of the tale, Nice work!

A really great story!

Great two little chapters. Magmaman you've gotta FTDS. Thank you. LP