102 Maple Street

Man

Can't tell you how much I love this story. The more I read it the more excited I go. I just wish it went on a little longer. But it does it job.

discusting

this was the sickest shit i had heard aand read, oh god i hope you all rot in hell for thinking of such sick shit and fucking wastn time!

well done

this was a good story, i enjoyed it, by the way if u think this is sick then dont read it, find something more productive to do, anyway well done keep them coming

What utter crap

This story is utter crap. The story line is unrealistic and the so called birthday surprise is nothing more than a gang rape and does not fit in with the loving family scenario of the opening paragraphs. The whole story is a confusing mix with the so called loving father punishing his daughter because of his wife leaving him. The story is also very poorly written. I note that the comments that voice approval of the story appear very similar in structure, could they be written by the same person?
Normally I would not comment on drivel such as this,but, the hate directed towards a loving daughter and sister is appalling. I can only rate this story as UTTER CRAP

Disgusting!

Oh wow. This was so sick and twisted. I loved it. I got so wet just by reading! Well done!

Old Faithful

This story is hot. I always cum when I read it while I play with my vibrator. great for those lonesome afternoons when hubby is away.

Yum.

This story was great! I actually came while reading it. I only wish you'd gone into more detail, especially at the end when both brothers were doing her at the same time.

There were a few times when names got mixed up, and I think it would have been easier to distinguish between the three if they all didn't start with D's.

Makes me wish

I'm a girl and this story makes me wish I was in the family! I love the fantasy of group sex with brothers, dad, uncles, cousins, etc. Please add to your story.

Ummm

How did it go from campy story about family love to a gang rape? I didn't follow...

SMOKING HOT

This is one smoking hot story. I found it very believable and I loved the hot sex that went on between the father,daughter and the brothers. GREAT JOB

If only!!!!!!!!!!

Woh,If only I had a daughter!!!!!!!!!!!!

Pigs

Big Male Pigs! This could have been a great story with kindness and slow gental manipulation. I could have been sexy a loving.

Horrible

Gang rape wtf..it was a horible story..from family loving it went 2 dispicable acts..filthy male pigs

are you kidding me

HORRIBLE HORRIBLE STORY. GO BACK TO SQUARE 1 PLEASE

disturbingly erotic

Although I abhor forced sex, this story had an erotic core to it. Glad it was written by a woman expressing a rape fantasy, not by a man whom I might have worried was close to the edge in making his fantasy real. AND for the sickos out there who can't easily delineate fantasy from reality. rape is bad! When a woman says no she means no unless it is part of a pre-agreed, pre-arranged fantasy game and there are not many women out there who will play those!!!!

How can you not?

How can you others even think its disgusting? The author has expressed a potential rape scene into something beautiful, i never even thought of gang rape when i read this.... Darla obvisouly liked what was happening, silly people, each to their own i supose

nice story!

if only i had a couple of brothers and a dad lke that...great story xxx

daughters cherry

all dads should take thier daughters cherrys

Disgusting

Disgusting. Not only was it gang rape, but your female character has been mentally abused most of her life. That is apalling

This was shit.

Not only did it go from everyone being caring to an utter gang rape and verbal bashing, it also was completely poorly written. Beside this story being garbage what is more shocking is the people on here saying that they wish they had daughters! Really you do? Wow..I can separate fantasy from reality, I hope most of the people on here can too....

Nice

I thought it was a good short story plenty of other people have commented on detail. I just wanted to say that it always gets my pussy dripping and I will read it over and over.

beautiful

freakin loved it. ill read it again. you are very talented.

Lots of potential

While the subject matter is controversial, you're going to hear positive and negative feedback. As far as the story itself, you rushed parts which could have used more detail (not graphically as far as the sex went), but background. It seems a little far-fetched that one minute she's trying to escape to she's right into it. That could use more as far as the character goes. You also rush the ending which is unfortunate. It makes me as a reader feel like once the initial sex scene was over you pretty much stopped caring about the story. You've definitely got talent, you shouldn't cut yourself off from a story though. It takes away from what you're trying to say.

really?

im not even going to touch on the subject matter. everyone has their own tastes. the writing style was disappointing. you need to set up your characters a little more. we as readers need to feel an attachment to the family... the fact that it all happened so quickly and brutally leaves me feelin violated. ... in the sense that i dont believe darla was happy about the birthday lovin. however... your story is in the top list... so you must be doing something right.

rude

I thought it was good but does need more detail you were rushing it a lil. But it still was a good read I think its rude there r people saying ur sick cause u went for a ruffer angle some of us like it that way and I really wouldn't expect people saying she is sick when most people think the whole idea of the fantsy is sick so that makes u sick 4 even thinking about it weather its soft and loving or ruff and hard

Some people need to move on

Would love to read more. I do not understand negative comments of those who say it is disgusting. They should have known when entering this section, that this sort of thing would be here. As for me, I loved it, I masturbated as I read it and came more than once. It was rushed alittle but the whole story line is erotic and I love it. Please write more!

I thought it was ok.. a little short, and akward, and while yes, rape is bad, this is *fiction* and it turned me on ;)

More Please!

I loved this story...MORE PLEASE!!! I thought it was great and would love for you to continue the story.

Awkward

Lots of potential but the awkwardness was a little hard to get around. All in all I dug the idea of the story though.

Wow, hate women much?

Rape, and a super-submissive wom--no, girl, despite her age--who is apparently doing nothing with life beyond cooking and cleaning for the men, and apparently now has "graduated" to being their fucktoy as well. Boring, not sexy and one of the most egregious examples of woman hating I've seen on here.

Yawn!

lame story, horrible writing style, under-developped characters... I could go on and on...
...and of course it had to be 11 inches, what else? And of course, being a virgin but horny, she had absolutely no problems adjusting to that.
Just stupid!

What the fuck -.-

Seriously. This story is quite possibly the worst story I've ever read. I'm all for incestuous rape stories but there was no fight in it. What woman in her right mind for leave a guy who had an 11 inch cock to go looking for a new one? What woman in there right mind wouldn't fight against it at the age of 23 and knowing full well what was going on. I could see if you made it so in the begginning she always followed her fathers orders no matter what or something bad would happen to her but you didn't. This is one of the most under devoleped stories I've ever had the displeasure of reading. I almost stopped reading it but contiuned on in hopes it would get better. It didn't. I'm severly disappointed.

This story has the potentional to be good, but not with you writing it.

liked it

I have to disagree, I liked it, it really turned me on and didn't drag out like alot of stories do. I'm all for big dicks shoved in little pussies and every other hole :)

Yum

This story got my pussy throbbing! I come on here for some quick, sick stimulation, not an in-depth novel, so kudos to the writer for turning me the hell on! Now I have to go find something to take care of this :)

I will say the double stimulation thing at the end was quite unrealistic - but like I said, I want quick stimulation, not a literary debate, and this story totally works.

zzzzzz....

really not a very exiting story and actually quite abusive and not at all realistic so over all it was a waste of time

dumb!

written by a teenage? it looks so...

very hot

I loved it...got me wet and wanting to be her

Needs More Action

The story was hot but it didn't have enough action with the boys. She should have let the brothers each have a turn at her body. Maybe the dad and boys could have helped each other to cement the family as one. She could have taken control and made the rules of the new family on who did what to who and when. Remember that she who takes charge is the one who makes the rules.

intresting

MORE ACTION WITH HER BROTHERS

wonderful story

thought it was one of the best written story i have read

i guess...

Family Pleasures

great! fantastic writing! Will be hard for a week after reading this one. As someone who grew up in a family that practiced incest of all types, this story brought back many great memories of sucking and fucking with relatives of both sexes. I was the main bi sexual whore and the "clean up" person to suck the cum that was shot on and in the others. I began when I was a pre-teen by fucking my sister and sucking off my uncles. I really enjoyed watching my mother fuck all the guys while she was sucking pussies. She used to let me sit close to the action and watch her being fucked. I couldn't wait to get old enough to take her myself. Once I became old enough to really participate I fell in love with fucking her while my father, brothers, uncles or others fucked my ass. I very shortly became accepted as the family queer that would give me body to all, any time, any place, any way they wanted it. I became a dedicated full time whore just like my mother and sister. I pimped for them, sucked off their tricks to get the cocks hard and then sucked out the cum. I eventually I got into cross dressing and that added to the thrill for everyone, especially me. I began to feel that I was a woman when I was dressed and taking cocks in my "pussy". I loved it when my father was fucking "Tina" and the rest of the family watching and waiting their turn at me. Many times I'd have two cocks buried in me while sucking the pussy of my mother or sisters. I still, many years later, have sex with family as many of the family as I can as often as I can. I never married since I had no reason to do to. Sex with male or female family members was always available to me. I love it!

My type of story

I am a huge fan of incest and taboo. I get wet when I think of my brother, and what I wish he would do to me. Loved it! More with tha brothers pls, it's kinda my thing. ;)

Loved It!!

HOT! Thank you for my orgasm. :)

MMMMMMM...soo good!

Lolita would love to be part of that family! Just hold me down and make me take it! Oh soo good!

Ya

My step sister gives me hand jobs but I wish I could put it in her

I can read this story over and over and it always makes me cum.....mmmm

My stepbrother fucked me last night when he read this. I was a virgin and he shoved his ten inch in me hard for two hours straight in my pussy and then another hour in my ass!!!! I would know cuz if the clock on the night stand

this story made me cum so hard
thanks

rape is not sexy

rape is fucked up nasty stupid and a major crime whoever thinks its sexy is fucked up in there head and there parents dropped them to many times on there heads