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I'm Recovering - At Last

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by LeBroz04/05/07

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Joy may be the antidote to a failed romance, but watch out for all those 'gimme's'. Midway through this piece you start lines with 'give me' so much that it suddenly felt like that was the way the whole poem had gone — it really dragged it down and helped lose your message.

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by BOSTONFICTIONWRITER04/05/07

Wow

"Wow!" I felt you.

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by AnaLeePleasured04/08/07

Great!!!

Glad to hear it at last! Keep smiling and living life to the fullest.

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by demi31lincs09/18/07

i could make you smile x

It wouldnt take long either

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