All Comments on 'Our New In-Laws Ch. 03'

by Novelista

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
PDG

Loved it.Why do these things always happen to someone else ?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
loved this one

"Like fish swimming up ladders at a dam her father's sperm jumped for freedom. "

That's priceless.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
FUCKING HOT

Keep it cumming this is a very good story. JUST FUCKING HOT.

hammer17hammer17about 17 years ago
WOW!!!

Great story. I hope you make the chapters longer though. That would give us more to think of between chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Heat Wave

This is one hell of a hot series. I'm looking forward to four more chapters and hope the author doesn't stop at No.7. Keep it coming Novelista!!!

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