Loved it.Why do these things always happen to someone else ?
"Like fish swimming up ladders at a dam her father's sperm jumped for freedom. " That's priceless.
Keep it cumming this is a very good story. JUST FUCKING HOT.
Great story. I hope you make the chapters longer though. That would give us more to think of between chapters.
This is one hell of a hot series. I'm looking forward to four more chapters and hope the author doesn't stop at No.7. Keep it coming Novelista!!!
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Loved it.Why do these things always happen to someone else ?
loved this one
"Like fish swimming up ladders at a dam her father's sperm jumped for freedom. "
That's priceless.
FUCKING HOT
Keep it cumming this is a very good story. JUST FUCKING HOT.
WOW!!!
Great story. I hope you make the chapters longer though. That would give us more to think of between chapters.
Heat Wave
This is one hell of a hot series. I'm looking forward to four more chapters and hope the author doesn't stop at No.7. Keep it coming Novelista!!!
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Back to Our New In-Laws Ch. 03 or
More submissions by Novelista.