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by sbrooks10307/01/15

A Deserved Happy Ending!

As long as she makes pretty damn SURE that it is ONLY dinner she’ll be okay!

“She was now committed to meet him for dinner the following night.” – She’s not “committed” to ANYTHING! It’s not like they have a legal contact or something – all she has to do is tell him that she changed her mind, that it’s not a good idea.

"Are we still on for tonight?” – Bingo! A perfect opportunity to say, “No!”

“He wouldn't know and wouldn't be hurt.” – She obviously doesn’t read Literotica! If she did, she would know that at some Jeff will meet Dan, and Dan will have that smirk that is always a giveaway that they have screwed the guy’s wife!

While I'm glad for the "happy ending", and DO feel that is deserved, it still shouldn't have taken a call from her husband for her to come to her senses.

And she should tell Janet about Jeff's actions - while she may not have been exactly a totally innocent victim, Jeff's actions were definitely inappropriate!

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by looking4it08/07/15

I guess I'm a bastard but really as soon as she agreed to a secret outing with a man whom she knows likely has an agenda to bed her she is toast in my book. Once they kissed at the beginning of the date that sealed the deal. She knew what she was going to do the moment she agreed to go out. She knew. If not for a fateful phone call from her husband she would have had sex, and probably a great deal of guilt. Still, she was unfaithful light years before the phone call. Good story, good author but lousy ending. Jeff deserved better, he really did.

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by sbrooks10311/30/15

Re-Reading

Her Jeff was hurting! He was alone and she wasn't there to help him!” – She kept saying how lonely SHE was with all of his travelling, it obviously never occurred to her that HE might be lonely, too!

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by Sampkyang01/20/16

she already cheated

dump the slut. she WILL cheat again, they always do

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by nancyharpman1701/23/16

Many People Think About Affairs. She Had One.

Almost only counts in horseshoes, hand grenades and slow dancing. She let another man run his hand up and down her thigh; she stroked his cock no less than three times; together they made the decision to continue their affair at her and her husband's home instead of a hotel room; after mutual groping she let a man other than her husband carry her upstairs to a bedroom in the home provided and furnished by her husband; the two cheaters stood naked in that bedroom; she disrobed willfully for a man who was not her husband; she broke the vows and covenants of marriage. She willfully became a cheating whore. The only thing she didn't do was get caught...yet! She threw it all away for an angry, arrogant young lover who was already plotting his next conquest. Her only attraction to Dan was to cuckoldJeff, whom Dan knew would always be a better, more successful, and loving man than Dan would ever be. Infidelity is NEVER worth the consequences. And they last forever!

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by pc1002/03/16

looking4it
Completely agree with you

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by Taffbanjo201304/17/16

Close call!

I'm usually in the BTB corner but I was strangely glad she was able to pull back. We are all human and she realised in time that she could ruin everything she wanted out of life.

Great story!

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by NewEndings04/19/16

it's all in the timing.

Here is the simple truth; we are all tempted at some point. If she had never agreed to the dinner date, she was a faithful wife. If she had brought herself to cancel the date at the office, she was just a tempted wife. If she had refused to let him into the house, she was a tease. As soon as he began to carry her upstairs, she became unfaithful. As soon as they started their foreplay, she was a cheater. The unusual call just served to prevent the completion of her desire. If she had allowed completion after the call, she would have qualified for the "slut" title. So, the call just prevented her being rewarded the "slut" title. She was already a cheater. Having said that, a story that makes us define boundaries in our own minds has seved an important function.

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Whether she does it AGAIN, or not.... she already cheated. If that phone had rung ten seconds later, she would have been eagerly sucking his cock and juicing up in anticipation of getting fucked senseless.

Calling it 'Almost' cheating is a total distortion of the truth because there's no question, whatsoever, that she cheated when she agreed to go to dinner with him, fully aware of what she was likely to do when they were alone... her panties getting wet in anticipation. She cheated when she met and kissed him in the parking lot, got into his car and let him take her to what they both knew was an unspoken promise of "I'm going to let you fuck me, dinner.". She cheated when she let him rub her cunt in the restaurant, she cheated each time she rubbed his cock and she was full fledge cheating when she invited him into her husband's house and told him to take her upstairs and fuck her in the room that she'd already prepared for that occasion. (the night before, while her husband was still in the house)

Sorry Celt but calling her an "Almost" cheater makes this a well written fantasy story.

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Additionally...

Had Dan, after pushing her back on the bed, not made that derogatory remark about her husband but taken his time getting back to forcefully making love to her and then "forced" her to go through with the fucking, she WOULD have done it. Her rationale? ("Since we've gone this far, it's not fair to leave him like this. We both planned this and I know he has a big cock to fuck my brains out with".... "Besides, it'll only be this once and Jeff is never going to know about it.") Justification is all she needed and she'd have been working it out in her mind while Dan was keeping her off balance by kissing her and stimulating her already wet, swollen pussy.
Dan fucked himself out of a sure thing fuck by getting nasty instead of pouring on more of the b.s. that had got her mouth to within an inch of his cock and would have done it again. He ALREADY had her in bed, partially naked and all night to fill her hungry pussy with his cock, while employing various styles of injecting her now hypersensitive cunt with heavy loads of his youthful, sperm laden jizm.

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by Pappy706/01/16

The telling thing in this little tale of woe

is the smile on her face as she answers the phone, knowing it's her husband, with Dan's dick in her hand, stroking it. The whole thing was to humiliate her husband, even if he didn't know, yet. I still think his whiny little bitch persona is a contributing factor to his planned cuckolding. She will take that chance again and go through with it. Hopefully his new job comes with bi-weekly testosterone injections and exercise classes so he can circulate it through his whole body and not just his ovaries. Don't remember what I scored it before, probably a 4 cause it was so well written.

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by boatbumm01/31/17

Nice Job!

Well written, I've just discovered your work and will read more.

I agree with the assessment posted by NewEndings. She's most definitely a cheater, just barely avoids the scarlet A -- saved by a phone call....

I wanted to leave a comment about your story "Was It My Wife?" but don't see any way to do that. Guess you've gotten too many comments from the trolls.... ;-)

Thanks for some good reads!

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