All Comments on 'Debbie Loses Her Virginity'

I thought the core idea here was excellent - just as sexy as it could be. But the execution left something to be desired. No lead up, no turmoil as she finally feels she has to surrender, no jealousy or rush of emotions. I'd like to see such a wonderful idea written with more feeling and a little less sex. Good luck!

It was ok in the first story I read, it seemed to fit the situation but the constant theme of oversized dicks in virgin cunts leaves much to be desired. Anyhow that's why it got a 50 instead of a 100 and why I lost interest in reading the rest of your otherwise excellent stories

He agrees to swap with his buddy so the other guy gets to fuck her and all he gets is a blow job? Cretin. And she lets the other guy go ahead as revenge? She's even more stupid.

Every story doesn't have to follow the usual route. I was surprised with the turn of events but it was well described.

http://www.literotica.com/s/double-date almost word for word you did make it alittle better but still you should at least not take credit for writing it

Just not believable. Granted it is just a story but it should have bit of truth.

Creampies are hot. Love to read about them and the oral sex of enjoying them.

This is a story I've come back to over the years, and it's always good for a stimulating thrill.

The core of the story is entrancing, and it covers watching others, swapping, oral sex, and anxiety that keeps the tension high and thus exciting.

In spite of the rapidity coming to a climax, so to speak, the urgency, lust, and wanting more really is the story driver. So near and so far is the expression that comes to mind. I get off on the story every time I read it.

Well done and thank you.

I really enjoyed this story, especially Larry confidently taking Debbie's virginity in front of her cuck boyfriend. I hope you'll write more. 5 stars.