All Comments on 'Katie's New Job'

I can't stop thinking about her!

She reminds me of children spying on their parents coupling in their bedroom. Cute and almost innocent but in a slow spiral. Maybe for a teen magazine?

I look foward to reading more of your work.

Too short,, not enough detail,,

A perrrfect first chapter for what I hope will be many.... The beatiful, yet unconfident protagonist, the hot sex among her three co-workers, leaving the protaganist un-touched..... who will guide her into a wanton lifestyle of pleasure??