...a little with the title. Black's Beach in La Jolla used to be clothing optional... a twist on the traditional "coming of age" theme, with two girls exploring their limits...fun read.
We used to have a beach like that here but it has been closed, anything you know near Cocoa? Great story too by the way- fun! fun! fun! in the sun! sun! sun!
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Anonymous04/18/07
I calls 'um as I sees 'um.
These characters were boring. Usually you write characters with a sensitive hand or Hell on wheels but never dull formula people as in this submission.I think you have some wonderful humans in your heart and I would like to know about them. Leighlilly
English
Caught me off guard...
...a little with the title. Black's Beach in La Jolla used to be clothing optional... a twist on the traditional "coming of age" theme, with two girls exploring their limits...fun read.
Where's the Beach!
We used to have a beach like that here but it has been closed, anything you know near Cocoa? Great story too by the way- fun! fun! fun! in the sun! sun! sun!
I calls 'um as I sees 'um.
These characters were boring. Usually you write characters with a sensitive hand or Hell on wheels but never dull formula people as in this submission.I think you have some wonderful humans in your heart and I would like to know about them. Leighlilly
Confused Girls Should Chill
Sexy stuff, all right -- but kinky in an awkward way! There's heat here, but pitifully little true sexuality -- and no sense. Still, I gave it a 4.
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