I went to Mexico, and all I got was this broken heart.
I went to Mexico, and all I got was this fetish for maids.
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Anonymous04/15/07
good story but too short
A good story which is well written. However, I think that the author should have had the maid speak some English, or he some Spanish, or a combination thereof. They could then have communicated some basic things such as their feelings to each other.
Additionally, the story could have gone on with him pursuing her to Mexico City, taking her back with him to the states, and on and on. .... with a meaningful relationship coming about and bilingual kids. But good story of limited scope.
RAG
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Anonymous04/15/07
OK, BUT....
...but, a rather serious mistake on the author's part.
He vacationed at this place in Mexico, "back in his younger day," when they had DIGITAL CAMERAS, with large memory cards! I don't think so.
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Anonymous04/17/07
Too much error
You forgot... Ever so many commas. I like the idea, a lot. But, you could do better with camma usage.
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Anonymous05/09/07
Good Story......
I enjoyed the story so much that I didn't notice the comma situation. I did think about the time frame during which the digital camera was invented....but only because I'm an amatur photographer. The story wasn't too short either and I thought it accomplished what the author intended ..... kinda like a "Strangers in the Night" sort of idea. TXRAD, I think it's terrific that you always fall in love with the females you write about. Leighlilly
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Anonymous06/17/07
Love this story !!!
Commas..what commas? Totally over looked them. The story was very well written and in a very real..down to earth manner. Never occured to me there was something "not right"
with the camera thing. I enjoyed the story very much.
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Anonymous04/04/08
more rimming please
loved your story. please put more scenes of analingus and guys licking the girl's ass for a long long time. i love reading your stories. you're the best
Great story, as you told the story I felt that I was right there with you all the way, Like it was me with her and you where telling my story. The only thing I was missing was a pic of her. I love it all, Xcept the fact that you wheren't able to see her again. Could've had more stories to tell.
Just had one the best orgasm!!!
THANK YOU!!!
GOD! You are fast becoming my favourite writer on this site!! Lovely story ... love the way you write sex! So hot...SO sexy...SO dirty...who needs words when the heat is white hot between the protagonists??? Just fuck away, I say!
English
nice
good plot line and well written
mexico
Why cant real life be as much fun as this story
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I went to Mexico, and all I got was this broken heart.
I went to Mexico, and all I got was this fetish for maids.
good story but too short
A good story which is well written. However, I think that the author should have had the maid speak some English, or he some Spanish, or a combination thereof. They could then have communicated some basic things such as their feelings to each other.
Additionally, the story could have gone on with him pursuing her to Mexico City, taking her back with him to the states, and on and on. .... with a meaningful relationship coming about and bilingual kids. But good story of limited scope.
RAG
OK, BUT....
...but, a rather serious mistake on the author's part.
He vacationed at this place in Mexico, "back in his younger day," when they had DIGITAL CAMERAS, with large memory cards! I don't think so.
Too much error
You forgot... Ever so many commas. I like the idea, a lot. But, you could do better with camma usage.
Good Story......
I enjoyed the story so much that I didn't notice the comma situation. I did think about the time frame during which the digital camera was invented....but only because I'm an amatur photographer. The story wasn't too short either and I thought it accomplished what the author intended ..... kinda like a "Strangers in the Night" sort of idea. TXRAD, I think it's terrific that you always fall in love with the females you write about. Leighlilly
Love this story !!!
Commas..what commas? Totally over looked them. The story was very well written and in a very real..down to earth manner. Never occured to me there was something "not right"
with the camera thing. I enjoyed the story very much.
more rimming please
loved your story. please put more scenes of analingus and guys licking the girl's ass for a long long time. i love reading your stories. you're the best
JUST LOVING IT
Great story, as you told the story I felt that I was right there with you all the way, Like it was me with her and you where telling my story. The only thing I was missing was a pic of her. I love it all, Xcept the fact that you wheren't able to see her again. Could've had more stories to tell.
Just had one the best orgasm!!!
THANK YOU!!!
Loved This one as wel!!!
GOD! You are fast becoming my favourite writer on this site!! Lovely story ... love the way you write sex! So hot...SO sexy...SO dirty...who needs words when the heat is white hot between the protagonists??? Just fuck away, I say!
you've done it to me again..
At the risk of turning into an internet stalker, I'm working my way through your stories. Wow.
Really good
Great stuff. Feels real, the people, the sex, the passion and the regrets. Well played
Lost loves
That hit the spot for me.
"I once had a girl, or, should I say, she once had me."
no pics?
Too bad, pictures would've been great
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