some commenters wow. First meaningless, well lets see by the story, could Brenda split to California? Hell yes, in a New York minute! Meaningless is just that, two great sex encounters with a guy, not some GUYS but something short she was not in love with the guy, nor developed attractions bonds or loyalties to. This satisfied that burden of "skeletons in the closet" by empting the closet. Sadly Brenda and Dave were now even. As for the one comment about her fault? Hum, Dave's discovery should have forced his recollections to his past some years ago but it didn't. In fact not until the message from Brenda " Joan Landon June 3 2005" when Dave's hidden world became not so hidden and crashed down. You might say did his heart attack have something to do with either the discovery of Brenda's affair or the now discovery that Brenda knew all along about his. Its a revenge story to me, one that sadly does have a somber meaning at the end. For me it begs the question, if you love someone so much, would you for sake everything, problems, cheating (if only one time in the life time) anything, if that person showed you the passion, love and true partnership that no other person could fill. If you have such spouse, is it worth it for a small "MEANINGLESS" sexual affair to make things even. Perhaps, taking that secret with you to the grave would have been better, perhaps (although a story) Dave would not have suffered a heart attack, perhaps the story would have had Dave and Brenda together even sharing a retirement home until he passes finally at a ripe old age. This is truly WHAT WOULD YOU DO stories.
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Anonymous07/19/16
A bad story
About two liars and cheats. Nothing entertaining or the least bit interesting about it. I have no idea why anyone would write a story about two despicable people like this. I'm sorry I read it and I'll never read another by this author.
about a bad situation. It's always easy to point fingers, at everyone else, but when it comes to taking the blame on yourself, there comes this indignation. I don't think this was about revenge, but it may have been. This story deserved a 5 because, it shows a realistic approach to what happens in life. No, it's not normal to cheat, but it is normal to pull out all the stops to save a marriage, which is what she did. The fact that he didn't recover will haunt her the rest of her life. How do I know that, otherwise why would she pull out all the stops to save it. Again Good Story
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good story
some commenters wow. First meaningless, well lets see by the story, could Brenda split to California? Hell yes, in a New York minute! Meaningless is just that, two great sex encounters with a guy, not some GUYS but something short she was not in love with the guy, nor developed attractions bonds or loyalties to. This satisfied that burden of "skeletons in the closet" by empting the closet. Sadly Brenda and Dave were now even. As for the one comment about her fault? Hum, Dave's discovery should have forced his recollections to his past some years ago but it didn't. In fact not until the message from Brenda " Joan Landon June 3 2005" when Dave's hidden world became not so hidden and crashed down. You might say did his heart attack have something to do with either the discovery of Brenda's affair or the now discovery that Brenda knew all along about his. Its a revenge story to me, one that sadly does have a somber meaning at the end. For me it begs the question, if you love someone so much, would you for sake everything, problems, cheating (if only one time in the life time) anything, if that person showed you the passion, love and true partnership that no other person could fill. If you have such spouse, is it worth it for a small "MEANINGLESS" sexual affair to make things even. Perhaps, taking that secret with you to the grave would have been better, perhaps (although a story) Dave would not have suffered a heart attack, perhaps the story would have had Dave and Brenda together even sharing a retirement home until he passes finally at a ripe old age. This is truly WHAT WOULD YOU DO stories.
A bad story
About two liars and cheats. Nothing entertaining or the least bit interesting about it. I have no idea why anyone would write a story about two despicable people like this. I'm sorry I read it and I'll never read another by this author.
great story
about a bad situation. It's always easy to point fingers, at everyone else, but when it comes to taking the blame on yourself, there comes this indignation. I don't think this was about revenge, but it may have been. This story deserved a 5 because, it shows a realistic approach to what happens in life. No, it's not normal to cheat, but it is normal to pull out all the stops to save a marriage, which is what she did. The fact that he didn't recover will haunt her the rest of her life. How do I know that, otherwise why would she pull out all the stops to save it. Again Good Story
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