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I mentioned this poem in the New Poem Review thread in the Poetry Forum. Please feel free to come along and join in. Welcome to Literotica. - wildsweetone (the 50% temp rating is so that it will not affect other temp ratings)
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I liked the rythm of this. You did that well.
-Curiouswife
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An interesting piece of hard & soft erotica, with rhythm and rhyme softening the edges. Almost sounds like a structured cheer.
sweet
nice choice of words,liked the rhythm. after i read this my first impression was "that was sweet".those "ie" words give this poem that young feel.annay
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