All Comments on 'Emily Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
SATISFACTION is making them wait!

Very well written with great descriptions and settings. You bring some special experiences or expertise to your stories and we - your readers - benefit! THANK YOU! I look forward

to more of your writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Beautiful

I love the passion in this series ... and the quiet violence that is at the same time so achingly tender. Looking forward to more of your work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Incongruous ?

The scene back at the hotel room near the end of the chapter didn’t make a whole lot of sense to me. Why the mock fight? At one point it was made to look like a rape scene, the conclusion hints at a long term relationship between the two where this kind of thing just happens. That said the start of the chapter clearly infers that what they’re doing is entirely new to them.

Overall it is a very erotic story and although they appear to be new to bdsm I did appreciate her conversation with the other sub.

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