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Amazing!
You already know I love your work. Outstanding!
gr8
Hot as always ... what was the name of that motel again?
Excellent story dude!
A fine addition to the chain. Well crafted and rich in descriptive imagery. Thanks.
Oh baby...
Very hot. I could imagine every thing. The detail was exquisite and the E/V was hot! Now, I'm thinking I need to visit the roof of some hotel to see if there is anyone doing naughty things up there. *grin* Great story! ~ Red
Great story!
Great story only surpassed by the writing of someone with much talent.
Only...Dan Tanner, Robert Urich played Dan Tanner a Vega P.I. and he played, among other things, Spenser in Spenser for Hire.
I knew Bobby, as well as, Robert Parker who wrote Spenser for Hire. The three of us sparred a few rounds at the gym in Boston when Parker was filming his television series in Boston. He lives in Cambridge. Also, Robert Parker was one of my creative writing professors. Your character's chosen name ruined the story for me but your writing ability over shadowed whatever difficulty I had reading it.
Great read. I recommend it to anyone who wants to get off.
By the way, do you have any stories that do not get the designated H for hot? (lol)
Oh, bugger!
I wish I'd written my own contribution to the chain before reading this! Excellent work, and some very nice imagery. On balance, I've decided to be inspired, and not deterred, so thanks for that, and for an excellent read. I'll finish writing mine before reading any more, methinks.
Alex
Wow!
I really liked this a lot. You have a gift for creating vivid imagery. I noticed this in another story of yours I read a while back as well. It almost plays out like a movie in my head as I'm reading. Your characters are very real.
Whew!
I think I need some of that AC after reading this. How the hell did I miss this one? Damn good story, Babe. Hot as hell! :) Script
Wonderful work!
Hot, sexy, well-written with amazing detail.
I could envision the hotel, baby, just as if we were all still there. And the towel. And the - yeah.
Excellent story!
A very
hot story, with good detail. It's also nice to know the main characters will be continuing their fun and games with each other, whether there is a sequel or not.
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