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Yaaaah
Good storyline but too short of a chapter..
more
you need to get to the aex part faster you leaving to much suspense.
hot. Hot. HOT!
amazing... this is utterly amazing.
yummy
WOW what a build up keep it coming...very very good characters......cant wait to see what happens next
spicy cliffhanger
come on stop it we wanna know what happenes next
ooh realli?1
omg plz finish this story!!!!
Please please please please please please please
UPDATE! I only just discovered this story and I love it. Please update and let's see how it pans out with the characters. Also please could you make the submissions a bit longer so we have more to enjoy?
Thanks
The Drama
I hope you are planning to comeback to this story. That just had enough drama to make me want to know what is going to happen next. I'll keep my eye out for an update.
*****
You should get an editor and continue this story. You have real potential as a writer.
Where's the rest of the story?
It's been several years. Are you going to finish the story? I really enjoyd it, and like the fact that wouldn't jump into bed with him.
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