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Beautiful
Hypnotizing and haunting, this is one of the most lush, unique, entrancing, and just plain gorgeous stories I've read in a while! Fantastic. Thanks for sharing it.
Marvelous
This is an amazing piece of erotic literature. Flowing speech, capture of the sublime, and a grasp and command of language I fail to see a flaw in.
Write more. :P
Accidental thrills
I stumbled onto this story by coincidence and am now amazed by your writing, amazed enough to leave a comment.
You have such a subtle way with words, such a rare grasp of language. Please continue writing.
Sad but beautiful
Wow...that was deep but geez such a sad tale.
Damn...
I agree with anon, I wish I could scrub this story from my brain, I hate sad, melancholy stuff like this.
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