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Camping Trip Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/11/07

Serial Stories

You should have a complete story ready to publish before submitting one chapter. It seems that most one chapter stories never get finished. H

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by Anonymous04/17/07

not group sex

there is no hint of group sex in this chapter, though I can see that you might be setting up for some in the future. It doesn't belong in this category. Also, each chapter should be longer. I could see no reason to break these up like you did. daisy

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by fallenangel_jaded04/18/07

This should be under Erotic Couplings

I apologize that this is under the wrong heading, I had requested that this be placed under "Erotic Couplings" and have sent a request to have this moved to the correct catagory, but at this time I have not yet recieved a response.

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