All Comments on 'Hannah and Mike Ch. 04'

Well written and definetly a very sexy series! Please continue. Thanks

GREAT chapter!! Don't you dare stop. Very talented writer.

Would love to read other stories you have and please continue Hannah & Mike!!!!!

You have the making of a great brother-sister novel here, would be a shame to abondon it now. At least finish the spring break week.

MUST HAVE MORE OF THIS FANTASTIC STORY!!!

Only 75% cos there isn't enough of it! More, please!

u got something good here and should keep it going

excellent story, although it seems not many people have left requests for more i belive many would greatly enjoy if you wrote more, including myself. congratulations on an excellent story

you shud def continue this one!!!

Man fucking awesome!!! How u think like that. All the parts were freakin. Man write a novel on hannah & mike. Including these chaps & a bit extending them. I promise u it will b the best selling book ever. Loved the characters. Marvellous!!!!!

Man fucking awesome!!! How u think like that. All the parts were freakin. Man write a novel on hannah & mike. Including these chaps & a bit extending them. I promise u it will b the best selling book ever. Loved the characters. Marvellous!!!!!

make more chapters. i think they should have what they DO afterwards in it, but just keep up with the good job

I've been reading Literotica for four or so years now, and this is one of the best stories I've read. Please, keep up the good work, and write more chapters of this story!

This story is truly terrific, and while this chapter was a little disappointing, you should continue it. But NO gay stuff, and the parents can not get involved,that would be just stupid and weird.

That was the hottest story ever, it wasnt like BAm screwing, it was the perfectsexual tension through out the story...almost like watching a movie!

xoxo

Man.. your style of writing is splendid...each and every scene can be savored... please do continue this story

plz do more to this storie i cant w8 for the next bit its been 2 years form last bit come back and give us some more good reading

This might be my favorite story on the website, great work

Fantastic story. Sure hope it continues.

hope it continues

very poorly written and way to much unrealistic teasing this needs a total rewrite by a good writer.

Very sensual and enticing... Sucked it was so short however continue the series.

who pays for all the rave reviews on subpar stories THIS IS NOT A RAVE STORY IT IS VERY POORLY WRITTEN WITH AN EXTREMLY DUMB PLOT.

I LOVE THE STORY VERY SEXY YET SIMPLE AND SENSUAL. GREAT GRAMMAR. GREAT DETAIL. ETC.. EVERYTHING WAS GREAT.BUT, CONTINUE ON AND MAKE A HANNAH AND MIKE CH.5

I liked this story and would love it if you come back to it

I enjoyed the story, I'd say worth continuing for sure. How did Hannah go from somewhat innocent to porn bjs in 8 months? Try to keep things consistent.

Great story. Please write more hannah and mike !

Continue plz have enjoyed reading this so far

Awwww,..written in 2007?? Damn!! We'll never get more chapters :(

Reminds me of my little sister and all the things I would love to do to her.

Blowjob, deepthroat and cum in throat are some of my favourite things to read about and you have done such an amazing job! Kudos mate and keep up the great work!

I meant 5 stars not 4

Another author wrote this exact same story, almost word for word and both of you still need one more chapter