What a beautifully written observation of a first year of grief. to the previous comment if the charecter is anything like real life no it wont always be like that, she will always be a part of him slipping in and out of his memory. The fact that the character recognises what is happening in a real person would be a sign that a step forward was ready to be made. It would be an indicator that he was ready to return to living.
I see that this is your first submission jazzysoul I hope to read more of your work. thank you.
English
sad
is this to continue for his lifetime
Firsts are always the hardest
What a beautifully written observation of a first year of grief. to the previous comment if the charecter is anything like real life no it wont always be like that, she will always be a part of him slipping in and out of his memory. The fact that the character recognises what is happening in a real person would be a sign that a step forward was ready to be made. It would be an indicator that he was ready to return to living.
I see that this is your first submission jazzysoul I hope to read more of your work. thank you.
Sometimes ...
I love to read such sad stories. Some tears and afterwards life gets better.
Thank you, good story
Nucleus
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