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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
A Good Editor Would Help

I'm not very often into the language police racket, though there's a lot her to work on..

Good story line although things happen with hard to believe speed--he's getting his cock sucked by this gal before they're out of the airport lot, and so on. A bit more plot development might be welcome.

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