The Happiest of Endings

Good story but;

Get his wife involved.

MY ULTIMATE FANTASY!!

Oh god I would love to feel Jade fill my ass with hot she cum as Julie throat fucked me until she fed me her creamy girl juice!!!! YUMMY!!! I came twice while reading your story, THANKS

wonderfully erotic

so well written and so intense, you have given me a new personal fantasy, only i wish to be either Jade or Julie!

FANTASTIC

This is my ultimate fantasy as well. I have had massages by men, where my ass is teased, but nothing more. I have always taken that real life experience and built upon it. Your story touched that nerve and was fantastic. Try something more - a sequel perhaps?

Wow! Great fantasy, well written, and totally hot!

Excellent work! Please keep writing

More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AWESOME

AMAZING STORY!!! thank the gods for creating such a good author for this series. i hope that you keep writing stories as good as this

Hit the spot

I thoroughly enjoyed this story which captured me into the
storyline very quickly and easily and then just continued to enhance and build the situation. It was well written and totally believable. I was really turned on and would love to see a sequel of some kind. Keep up the good work

great, but mistake

loved it, but the theme is by the who, not yes

You are right

The CSI theme song was definitely by "The Who", not "Yes"

She asked "Who did the theme?"

He answered "Yes" - as in "yes they did" not as in the band called "Yes"

Great!

Im pretty sure the Who thing was a joke?? It made me laugh anyway! Read it again something like 'she asked me Who did the theme tune for it and she was confused when I said yes.' As in, he thought she asked if the Who did it. It's really not all that hard to understand... And a brilliant story, keep up the good work!

Please write some more about fascinating subject

Some years ago I picked up a delicious street whore who turned out to be a transexual, and have loved trannies ever since, cannot get enough of these wonderful creatures. Please write more about them, specially as well as you did this story. Dino, who loves shemales of all colors, sizes, etc.

great story

made my cock hard and my ass twitch as I thought of his surprise ;=)

Excellent story

I really laughed at "Hot wax for the shelf from the candle, Hot cum for me from Jade, he thought, that's almost poetic."

HOT

Great story. Would love to get taken like that.Have always wanted to find a women to fuck me in my ass. Living in a small town makes some of the great experiences with different sex experiences impossible to find.

song

only thing wrong, The Who do the theme for CSI, not YES =) great story.

nicely written

Great stoy, and unlike the other comment, I did get the 'Who'/'Yes' joke...

Hot!

This story was really a turn on for me. The idea behind the story is on my bucket list. My wife has fucked me with a dildo and fisted me. I would love to feel a hard cock cum in my ass while either sucking a cock or eating a hot wet pussy.

Excellent!

This story seems like a dream!Thank you and I hope you will write more like it! perhaps a continuation would be fun, especially with the same characters!

Exceptional a shared fantasy

Incredible my brain raced

penny for your thoughts

The wife should come along next time.

Not what I expected!

Oh my was that good! So hot!!!

Wonderful

Hot and sexy!

love it

i loved your story, i hope you will write more about them.
i hope you will make jade more dominant, she sounds amazing even if its just a story :)

Title?

That was incredible! More, soon, please.

nice one

great story love to try this one

Happiest Beginnings

THAT was one of the hottest stories I've read in a while. Well done.

hottest story ever

the hottest story I ever read

Awesome story!

I loved this story! It's the kind that really gets me going! I hope that you will write more T-Girl stories! This is the type of story I used to search for, but could never find. Thank you for sharing it with us.

loved it

this is the stuff of dreams

Great story

Story had me hard from the beginning. Wish I could find a place like that! Bet it would feel great taking two cocks at once.

Hot

Where do I sign up to be David?

Where Do I Sign-Up

Very erotic story. Agree with another poster, get David's wife involved.

ruwild - I Wannabe ... like you!

You have reason to be proud. So many quality followers of your erotic mind, and the fingers that translate into stimulating words for others to enjoy ... and stroke and Stroke too. Then there's "ruwild" who seeks works like this. For those who haven't found his works, I personally place ruwild on a similar plain with "bb1212". Oh so many quality authors, so many hot, good intentioned stories to keep the juices flowing. I love it here on LitErotica. I'm "with you" VWC10.

that was fantastic

really fantastic

Gorgeous story

Such a sexi story, you should write many more in this vein x

Songs for CSI

The story was great - always enjoy a VG tranny story! Just a little correction - the theme songs for all the CSI shows were done by the WHO.
Duke

The Who / Yes thing was a joke...

This is my previous comment trying to explain.

You are right

The CSI theme song was definitely by "The Who", not "Yes"

She asked "Who did the theme?"

He answered "Yes" - as in "yes they did" not as in the band called "Yes"

Thanks to everyone who has read, commented and/or voted on this story.
I am humbled by the incredible respose.

BB1212

ON THE COMMENT OF THE THEME

by the WHO, or YES. one could type WHO OR YES or a new Abbot.Cosello monologue, and the answer us YES WHO or WHO is YES, is yes more than WHO or WHO is YES. I am still drunk from the Preakness, TK U MLJ LV NV

Hose for David

Next time david should slide some thigh high sheer nylons on his legs so he can feel the girl nylons slip up and down his legs and get the whole sensation

very very erotic ! I can easily imagine being Julie as I know a gurl just like her.
More please !!

Great story

I reaklly enjoyed the story, very hot...

Sequel

Title nuff said story was fucking hot man

Keeps getting better ... And BETTER

I read this one before and lost track of the link. The second time I found it, I loved the delivery !!!! even more and forwarded it to a friend. Third times the charm. I can't get enough of your writing ... And the theme.

Bareback

I want to feel that hot cum from those to ladies fill me ass.

Who, Yes, The Band....

You have found another Band (Yes) to add to the Animiacs version of Who's on First:

Slappy Squirrel: ["The Who" is playing on Stage] Skippy, what's the name of the Band, playing on Stage?

Skippy Squirrel: Who.
Slappy Squirrel: The name of the Band.
Skippy Squirrel: Who.
Slappy Squirrel: The Band, playing on Stage.
Skippy Squirrel: WHO!
Slappy Squirrel: THE BAND!
Skippy Squirrel: No Aunt Slappy, "The Band" performs later, "WHO" is on Stage!
Slappy Squirrel: You tell me.
Skippy Squirrel: Who.
Slappy Squirrel: The name of the Band.
Skippy Squirrel: Who.
Slappy Squirrel: The Band playing on Stage.
Skippy Squirrel: Who.
Slappy Squirrel: THAT's WHAT I WANNA KNOW!

I would love to see a sequel involving the wife...maybe a few. If he is going to get "massaged" regularly, Allie might follow him and catch him in the act; or investigate on her own and get her own "massage"...leading to them running into each other...

I love the way you write.

Really something

It's kind of like when you go to the store for an item and come back with something completely different. David went in for tuna and decided to try the sausage instead. Good Story.

Excellent Story There That Should...

...Keep me up at night. Would love to meet someone like David, very erotic and hot story that was well written and designed. Thanks for sharing David, Jade, and Julie with us, and please keep writing, you're very good!

Very well done

Nice to see two trannys working, and described so well that they both were a suprise.

Yes great and well written

Loved the story. Great stroking story and yes please keep on writing this story please