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by LeBroz04/14/07

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I did a look back at pieces you wrote a couple years ago and this shows a huge amount of improvement; it flows so much better with the improved line breaks; keep it up!

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by My Erotic Trail04/15/07

the woman...

I liked the way the poem flowed, literally (~_~) nice write.

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by oregon_gal04/16/07

last 2

lines....wonderful!

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by Pandoras Desire04/16/07

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Thanks everyone for the coments.

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