All Comments on 'Fetishes': Choker Ch. 01'

Very good you are talented author and sp far you work is very good. But the in the end things happend alitle to fast but i'm looking forward to the next chapter.

You have a great talent for MC writing. Can't wait for the rest!

But maybe you and/or your editor should have run this through a spell checker

very nice just continue please

It's a nice story. Just hope there is more to it later.

Please finish these stories. Both have great potential and I am enjoying them.

Good ideas and effort. I think your editors need a little help. Several typos still made their way through, i.e. "genes" instead of "jeans". Keep writing!

This is a really great story, The characters are likable, their insecurities are believable and I find the subject matter to be unique from the other stories that I have read on this site.

That being said, I feel that this stories merits are outshined by the frustration that it is not yet completed.

This is a very good, very original, and well crafted story.

I would really like to know what happens next.

Please, do not let the story go unfinished. Too many great stories have passed into obscurity because of this, which is a crime to great storytelling..