Thanks fairycharmed_girl. This story was well written, had hot sex, realistic sex and characters and was direct to the point without losing its realism. And i was thinking of someone as I read it and recommended it to her too! cheers
the story was good, good plot , good execution but the "says I" "Says Him" kinda drove me nuts an took away from the story
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Great Piece of.....Writing!
Thanks fairycharmed_girl. This story was well written, had hot sex, realistic sex and characters and was direct to the point without losing its realism.
And i was thinking of someone as I read it and recommended it to her too!
cheers
good story .....but
the story was good, good plot , good execution but the "says I" "Says Him" kinda drove me nuts an took away from the story
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