All Comments on 'The Other Woman Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
great job

now dont take this the wrong way

great job but a bit more tension (sexual of course)and build up but a great story

JJ

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bornagainbornagainalmost 17 years ago
Good story

Next time try the groeup sex section instead of lesbian if your going to include a man in the story .

pat

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