All Comments on 'White Sound'

There are some excellent images in this poem and the face screaming into the pillow is a great metaphor for the urgency of passion. There are a few images that I think weaken the poem ("ass" for example; it's an interesting image, both literally and metaphorically, but there has to be a more delicate way to put it). Great write overall!

This poem was mentioned in Wednesday's New Poems Reviews.

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